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November 1999

The joy of writing is one of the few true joys of life. If you do not believe me, consider that such a simple sentence as the first sentence of this little article was rewritten three times before attaining its current form. There's a certain nuance to writing and making the words appear the way that you want them to, that, when it happens, makes you intensely glad that you're a writer.

What I'd like to write about this month is the art of writing. I know, I know, this is the same thing that I write about every month. But bear with me on this one.

This month's focus, with regards to writing, will be on the writing of poetry.

Some have considered me a poet with some promise. Indeed, frightening as this may sound, some have even taken my writing seriously enough that I have been published in a small literary journal published at my former school (Brock University). So what I'd like to do is take you through a step-by-step creation of a poem. Not just any poem, but the official Just Add Water Poem Of The Month. I like the thought of that, and all those capital letters kind of set this poem apart. Most of my poems I title after they've already been written, but because this is a special poem, I think I'll begin with the title.

The.

I like that title. It's short, to the point, and sufficiently ambiguous.

Now that we have a title, we need to think of what sorts of words are suggested by the title.
To me, the title suggests articles. Lots and lots of articles. Definite and indefinite articles alike. The more articles, the better. I love articles. They're lots of fun.
So an early draft of the poem 'The' might look as follows:

--
the	the
the the the the
the 		The
The the the the

The t he
the
--

A couple of problems present themselves immediately here. Firstly, the indecipherability of meaning presented by such a poem. I mean, which 'the's should be stressed, and which shouldn't?

Perhaps we should insert a few words, here and there. Not too logically or consistently, just words randomly chosen.
Second Draft:

--
the cow	the day
the brain the orange the underwear the gray
the noose	The tortilla
The world the queen the poem the meaning

The time he made
the use
--

Now we at least have something that at very least would qualify as DPIACTT, if not true poetry. Perhaps some revision would be useful.

Third Draft:
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The Autopoiema (notice the expanded title)

the cow sees the day
the brain like the orange and the underwear is now gray
the noose leaves the man musing The tortilla chip that is 
The world, where the queen, the poem, and the meaning are distinct

The time he made to find
the use of the Big Green Thing.
--

We now have what is recognizably an abstract poem of a very 20th century flavour. See how easy it is to make a poem?

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